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Enthusiastic
Passionate
Zealous
Obsessive
Adoring
Keen
Passionate
Stimulating
Fastidious
Fervent
Wholehearted
Heartfelt
Magnificent
Jam-packed of sentiments
Congenial
Heartwarming
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Finicky
Enthusiastic
Passionate
Zealous
Obsessive
Adoring
Keen
Passionate
Stimulating
Fastidious
Fervent
Wholehearted
Heartfelt
Magnificent
Jam-packed of sentiments
Congenial
Heartwarming
Obsequious

Terms are fewer 2 communicate the infatuation uncovered in this poem.

I away from uncertainty appreciate this poem by heart!!!!

This poem gets 10/10

Anticipate this facilitates :-))
 
As hard as I try I'll never be the best.
I feel neglected, unwanted, forgotten, a mess.
What gets me is I try, I do the best I can,
I run back and forth always trying to lend a hand.
When no one else is there it's like I'm above the rest, but soon as someone else comes along I'm back to second best.
I don't lie, they say I'm the only one they trust, but still it seems like everything I do goes to waste.
Cuz if theres anyone else around besides just one of you and me, you act like you don't know me, you always turn away.
I don't know whats wrong with me, I don't know why no one notices all I do.
I'm that voice you hear but you still won't listen, like all my thoughts just go to waste.
My ideas are repeated just a moment later, pretended like they didn't come from my lips,
My conversations evaporate as soon as someone else enters the room.
I feel like last resort, I feel like second best, I'm not sure what I do wrong, but from my view I just give my all to you.
 
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