How is it? i just want some feedback.?
Give and Take
Can u take what isnt there?
if you can, it comes from where?
an oppertunity that wasnt real
And now its gone, this i can still feel
Why must things change?
why should it be estranged?
To be set out, and dignified
hated but still bonifide.
Why cant things be steady?
Why are humans not allowed to be ready?
Why cant things be simple to see
why so complicated, just to be
to be what, you ask
to be here, to even show your mask
To have the right to be here
to have the right to feel, to fear
Life is never honest
to get it to be is a hornets nest
Life isnt what you make
Life is simply give and take
--Dustin
give your honest opinion pls
