Poetry: is this poem good and any suggestions to make it better?

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two- tone

Part of me is a light purple
quiet and shy
timid and hushed
not talking to anyone and standing off alone
but deep inside there's another part.
a bright red
vibrant and red
outgoing and talkative
smiling a laughing with friends
yet they're both very real and they're both very me!
 
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