Poetry!!!!!!! I love it! Hope you do too!!?

Josh

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"Somewhere Gladly, I’ll Travel Beyond"

Eyes flutter awake to life...

Beautifull gasping as each wonder passing by,

Completely content with every abnormality,

No corruption ,nor lies to face,

Just simple bliss, that can’t stay,

Lips shut with the days,

Things just don’t seam so entrancing,

Confusions a mist in happiness and tears,

Questions that mock the stars,

Hands fall from their grace,

What perpose is there to fullfill,

Doubt is near, so far inside,

Truth like words to choked up to say,

Heads bow down hiding face,

The world is not so new,

Is it time lifes through,

Memories all that remain,

Of that occasion so distant still,

When eyes fluttered awake to life,
And when a whisper sealed them shut....


"Not how I feel................. "
I can handle the cuts,

I can stop this bleeding,

but I can't stand listening to you leaving,

I can handle the scars, but the memories remain,

Will we ever be the same again?

I turn I cant bare it, I love you that I swear it,

I'm drowing in the air, I'm swimming in despair,

Looking in I see I'm blind, all the pain I see in my mind,

Feel me crying, see me burn, taste my sorrow, hear all that I've learned,

This life it's all my own, bent on loss and old brimstone,

Fire it's swelling my dark indwelling,

my memoirs are of your face,

a smile lost to my disgrace,

I think I've fallen beyond retreat,

so far, so gone,

maybe I was all along,

each level more diserning,

less chance of me returning,

here I stand eye to eye,

my past, my future, I see how I die,

alone...........


"So you can Smile"
I know sometimes you feel like your alone,

I speak to you in that reassuring tone,

hey, I'll say it with a smile....

if he didn't see how amazing you are

he isnt worth your while,

Youll smile at me, say 'thanks, your such a friend......'

and I'll stand emotionless, stuck at that end....

each pain, each tear, each heart ache,

I hear the same, I fear, how much more can your heart take?

is there a way I can end it all.....

my love, my joy, life at its fall, its yours.

I'll give you everything, except my wonder.......

of how everything, and perceft,

are not the same......
Thanks for the Comments, if you like these, I have...what I assume are my better poems posted here!
http://ca.answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AhbuhALOi0YNm5NSIJxY.5fAFQx.;_ylv=3?qid=20090723004248AAA4LuQ
 
OMG! I love thm! their just so beautiful full of emotion in every word! don't stop writing like that you have a gift! good luck if you want to be a author of poetry[=
 
You are a very talented writer. This poem mesmerized me making me believe that truly I was in paradise. The way you capture someone slowly falling from that paradise is what amazed me. You have without a doubt impressed me and I commend you.
 
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