how can i make this poem much better using musical devices
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the topic is being happy and it has to do something with spring
The day was like no other.
It was a sunny day,
It was bright yellow and was gleaming everything it shined on,
The weather was perfect not too hot and too cold,
Kids laughing and splashing in the pool,
The smell of new bloomed flowers ,
And everyone was so kind,
The Day was like no other.
thanks
the topic is being happy and it has to do something with spring
The day was like no other.
It was a sunny day,
It was bright yellow and was gleaming everything it shined on,
The weather was perfect not too hot and too cold,
Kids laughing and splashing in the pool,
The smell of new bloomed flowers ,
And everyone was so kind,
The Day was like no other.