Poetry Help Please!!?

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I AM POEM

I am Determined and a Musician

I wonder about the sounds I hear and the sounds I create

I hear birds chirp along with my music

I see my name in bright lights at the prestigious Carnegie Hall

I want to inspire others with my creations

I am Determined and a Musician

I pretend to wrap my music around the souls of others

I feel the cold piano keys beneath my hands

I touch the hands of destiny when performing

I worry that my music is not perfection

I cry when I see people be moved by my music

I am Determined and a Musician

I understand the meaning of music

I say every song has a meaning

I dream of being compared to Mozart and Chopin

I try to inspire the minds of children and adults

I hope for people to hear my own musical creations

I am Determined and a Musician
 
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