Poetry help? Does this sound cheesy?

abigail

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Does this part of what I wrote sound cheesy? If it does, what could I use instead of the last 2 lines?

"Possibly to find that one special someone who
Wraps you tightly in never ending hugs?
That special someone who will sit beside you
And help count the lightening bugs?
I thought it was a little cheesy too lol, but the poem is about what makes life worth living. I don't know if it's any good.
 
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