Does this part of what I wrote sound cheesy? If it does, what could I use instead of the last 2 lines?
"Possibly to find that one special someone who
Wraps you tightly in never ending hugs?
That special someone who will sit beside you
And help count the lightening bugs?
I thought it was a little cheesy too lol, but the poem is about what makes life worth living. I don't know if it's any good.
"Possibly to find that one special someone who
Wraps you tightly in never ending hugs?
That special someone who will sit beside you
And help count the lightening bugs?
I thought it was a little cheesy too lol, but the poem is about what makes life worth living. I don't know if it's any good.