Poetry development :( ?

Jd Dawkins

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So im kinda an artist. i paint and draw my feelings. well recently i've tried writing... so these are my short little things of the day. but theyre always so short :( help plz?

When I close my eyes, I see your face
That big smile that left without a trace.
Theres only one thing I want to say. I wish i would've said it everyday.
I love you.
I wish your life you did not take
I wish your heart did not break.
I wish I could've been there for you-that horrible day
I would've stayed true and only wanted to say-
that I love you.


I lie awake thinking of how things could be.
Imagining-hoping, that when i wake up, you'll be right next to me.

and thats all i got :( im new at this and well frankly,,,, i suck.
 
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