Poetry Contest! Best poem chosen as best answer.?

Sonix

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Hey there. I'm bored so let's host a poetry contest.!!

Enter your best poem (only one) here and the best one will be chosen as the best answer.

Limit on lines: 30
Theme: Any
Language: English. (Please)
Judges: Me (",)

Please enter, this will be cool.
Thanks*
 
standing outside the gilded doors,
in miniature, I climbed under the toadstool
to hide...what if they find me here?

coveted thoughts inserted,
the need to repent choked at me
stuck in my throat, soothing
a lozenge, of sorts

as the collared almighty walked in,
I followed Him and dared
to Hell with me, I swore

power to the pulpit, in chorus and echo
Hallelujah sinners rock!
in olden days, there was a trust
since tainted
from belief and wisdom

hidden from view, I snapped to
full of size and on my knees,
delivery service had begun

anointed waters flooded me
to a point of vision
the last drop, a crystalline hammer
catches me standing outside
clicking my heels for flight
relentless and ready


this chance feels like deja new
 
The Power of Forgiveness
"Looking straight into those beautiful eyes
Flying and dreaming
Really believing
Blinding myself to the precious disguise
Another harsh lesson that looks are deceiving
Throughout the thick, throughout the thin
My heart was still beating for you
I wish I could say it came by surprise
but deep down I already knew
Did you follow your heart or follow your head?
Too smart for your own good
Reality hurts, but the pain has its perks
for the wise that learned what you could
another sun beginning to show
the broken soul still aching to know
what was the point of this shit??
Then came along my ground and my sky
who reminded of the beauty in why
we must forgive and forget
You may only help one
perhaps even none
but touching that one will count
Cause then they can go to teach what they know
and that is what life is about
Tragic moments will come
They can tear you apart
or help you and drive you to make a fresh start
You always are given a choice
Everything happens for valuable reasons
so through the changing of all of the seasons
inspire the Earth with your voice"
By: Jarren Thomas McCartney (my brother)
 
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