Poems i would like to show you....can you rate them all please /10?

friggenhell2008

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First poem

its not you, its me
im feeling downtrot
but its not your fault
can i burden you again?
if its better to not
to stand outside
lying in on the floor
crawling my way through
the doggy door

Second poem

is this a dream?
where is my pinch
how much have i lost
what has become of us
you say its not me
its another doing wrong
well why be so pitiful
if your going to lie to me all along

Third poem

you are the sandy beaches
the soft patches of grass
comfortable and relaxing
under the same moon ad stars
your the leaves on the trees
falling down upon me
moving side to side
with the breeze so freely

Forth poem

this could be the end
the breaking of the knot
finally being pulled apart
why is this always happening
every poem i write
tells future, tells truth
or is this a spell that worked?
i notice this alot
maybe i should stop
but maybe its a helper
to get me through
to keep me sheltered
 
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