poem....starting on the rhyming?

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Michelle Burke

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btw when i mean go i mean like leave this place ( not the world)

You know im not okay
But you leave me alone anyway
Your lifes so great and free
When im struggling still being me
Im tired of feeling like this
Wandering alone in this dark abyss
Hoping one day you will know
All i want to do is go
 
thats good you could alsoget more into it and use better words like this:

you know that deep inside of me
i am extremely unhappy
if you had taken the time to assess
you would see that im deeply depressed


feel free to use that part and call it your own :)
 
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