poem: resent it (comment/critique)?

C

Cat Grenade

New member
let me speak, give my turn
let it pass, you have learned
to hold your tongue and look away
when nobody nods to what you say

float away and out
i can be above
holding onto spades
undisturbed by love

white spaces and foot steps
oblivious you never met me
i didn't get a word in
but you looked good, again
they saw what you meant
they saw i was shit
and you looked good, again
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comment and critique please :)
 
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