i was messing about in class and ended up writing this o: it's not very good. i kno that for SURE but i wanted yer opinion ;DD
Your body trembles violently,
Calling death unto itself.
Forget the thunder and the lightning,
And sleep, my sweet, and sleep.
Your broken bones and shattered skin,
Bleed the colour of the sickest hell.
Drowning sorrows, filled within,
But sleep, my sweet, but sleep
You bear the weight of a thousand lies,
And the commitments you failed to keep.
Yet you crave our love so selfishly,
Fall asleep, my sweet, fall asleep.
Your eyes have always been blind to the truth,
You allow the wild fire to break lose,
Crushing the day that you were born,
Almost asleep, my sweet, you're almost asleep.
I lay with you in your darkest hour,
And share the pain that's free inside you.
The hole in our trust will never be mended,
And you fell, my sweet, you fell asleep.
-Zaraaaaaa :]
P.S. Be as critical as possible :]
Thank yoouu :]
Your body trembles violently,
Calling death unto itself.
Forget the thunder and the lightning,
And sleep, my sweet, and sleep.
Your broken bones and shattered skin,
Bleed the colour of the sickest hell.
Drowning sorrows, filled within,
But sleep, my sweet, but sleep
You bear the weight of a thousand lies,
And the commitments you failed to keep.
Yet you crave our love so selfishly,
Fall asleep, my sweet, fall asleep.
Your eyes have always been blind to the truth,
You allow the wild fire to break lose,
Crushing the day that you were born,
Almost asleep, my sweet, you're almost asleep.
I lay with you in your darkest hour,
And share the pain that's free inside you.
The hole in our trust will never be mended,
And you fell, my sweet, you fell asleep.
-Zaraaaaaa :]
P.S. Be as critical as possible :]
Thank yoouu :]