Poem HELP PLEASE!!! LOOK!?

matrix1516

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Okay, this is a stupid poem I am writing and need some help with. Each line needs to be 10 syllables with the rhyme scheme: a,b,a,b,c,d,c,d,e,f,e,f,g,g.

I don't even know if what I even wrote makes sense but it seems to flow somewhat good haha.


How can spring break be so suddenly soon,
Stuck in a shit-hole, while thinking of you.
For one shall not wait until a blue moon,
To return again or I say adieu.

Away from the one I love so dearly,
I party hard, for there’s no returning.
But listen baby, I ask you merely,
Forget me not, for I shall be yearning.

Question me not, for you will be missed,
WHAT TO GO HERE(F)
Remembering just the last time we kissed,
WHAT TO GO HERE(F)

WHAT TO GO HERE(G)
WHAT TO GO HERE (G)
 
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