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K

*~kirsti~*

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When I looked into your eyes,
You were a friend
Just living your life
Not worrying about anything
Barely even noticing me.

As I look into your eyes,
You are in love
Living to make me happy
Not caring about the rest of the world
Only wanting me.

If I look into your eyes,
You won't know who I am
Living for you and your family
Not thinking of the past
Just a stranger to me.
 
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