poem called ( power of the tongue) tell me what you think of it?

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It's been said that words can heal, calling it so even if it doesn't feel real. some of the things i say may cause others to gaze, i've even been known to say things that invoke powerful rages, also predicting things as it happen in stages, so if the words we say can stir up ones emotion, and cause disarray, why don't we say things to put things in it's proper space, like tearing ourselves and others down or even talking about our little rusty town. if power is all in the tongue we should all say things to build, because it's all in god's perfect will, it's time we put things in perspective ways, to heal our community and even our most unthoughtful ways. let's start within first and quench our mind with truth instead of lies, in the power of the tongue is where we keep our faith alive.
 
Excellent poem. There is a lot of truth in your words & you have expressed the truth very well. It will be easier to follow when you place it in verse form.
 
thats good!

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