Poem any good... ?? Randomly off the top of my head...?

bygolly248

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Okay, I am bored, so I'm going to try to write a poem off the top of my head right now, about... idk yet! So, can u tell me if it is any good?

As they walk hand in hand, she peers up at his face
Her love for him shines back at her in his own eyes
This moment she wish could last forever
But daydreams go by as quick as they come

^ wow... nothing rhymes... does it have to rhyme??

She stares at him from across the room
If only knew the depth of her loving
If only her love could some how be spilt in two, so they could share
If only...
She stares back at the paper she should be writing
A tear at the crease of her eye threatens to slip over
'If Only" the phrase that cuts us all apart
 
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