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Beth Holland

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One adventure
One love
Brought a melt down
To my heart and my mind
Trashing and snatching
Aching and screaming
I'm torn open*
Not even bandages can heal me
Nor stitches can fix my wounds
They are to deep and rigged*
Blood pooring from my vains*
Loosing the light finding the dark
Leading me to a new adventure*
And new found love
That once again sent my down in a tumberling storm
More*trashing and snatching
Aching and screaming
My wound is deeper then before
I think it's at me heart
Can you see it?
Is it beating?
I've went numb someone please tell me I'm still alive*
Am I moving? Or even breathing?
Can anyone hear my cry for help?
Is it to late?
Someone please come..
Come nurse my body.. My wounds
Back to health*
 
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