Poem About 9/11! What do you think?

trevor.poet

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Do you like it? Is it good or bad? I'm asking in this category, because the poetry category is slow this time.

"Let's Roll"

As the towers collapsed on that fateful day,
A nation stood silent, united to pray,
Siblings and friends all died that day,
The actions of a few stole theirs lives away.

Mothers told children that daddy wouldn't ever be back,
Their confusion showed sensibility the perpetrators lack,
Some watched with horror, others looked away,
As the acts of a few took so much away.

Minute by minute we witnessed planes crash,
Leaving trails of smoke and a skyline of ash.
The savage acts left many with nothing to say.
How could so few take so much away?

Still there were hero's who refused to standby,
As a radical few caused thousands to die,
“Let's Roll” they yelled as they took back the plane,
Their actions saved many, their deaths weren't in vain.

-Trevor S.
 
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