plz read this poem i wrote it today and let me know how is it?

eli-zabeth

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Let see were will this go!

When I learn my lesson,
I find hope!
But it hurts because its no fun!

It is a secret that does not fly,
Sometimes it is heaven
Sometimes it makes us cry.

There is open friendship
that goes with time.
There is no end to this trip,
thats why i learn to climb!
 
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