plz help i need help with my blurb. be honest is it written bad. i can take it!?

elaine

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(she is going philippines cuz she wants to forget her problems and her grandfather's death. she us to be scared to go back cuz she doesnt want to be in the country he died at. she gets herself into trouble with catherine. she is a good girl who acidentaly gets herself in bad situations)

Jean. gentle and proper heads to the Phillippines for a winter vacation, desperately trying to get over her grandfather's death. Along with Catherine, her best friend, Stunning and immoral. She slowly becomes lost in a sinful new world, where meets dangerous men and backstabbing women. Will Jean change for the worst or the better?
(rewrite any part u feel needs it. or give me tips)
 
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