pls help i am writing a childrens story?

Stan Cranley

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ok, so i am writing a story for littlekids

it is kind of liek a fairy tale and there are 3 kids in the forest and then the Big Bad Wolf chases them and chases them. and pretty much the whole book is the Big Bad Wolf chasing them but at the end of the story it is revealed that 3 kids ARE IN FACT THE BAD BAD WOLF and they were just chasing THEMSELVES. and it's like whoa that just blew my mind

and that is called a surprise ending or a plot twist like in the movie SAW or THE SIXTH SENSE or FIGHT CLUB

do u think this sounds like a good story if u want to blow ur mind?
 
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