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A girl sits at her windowsill:
The same time every day.
A boy walks by, bucket in hand:
She melts as he walks away.
When the sun is high, he strolls through town.
The people stop and stare.
It drives them crazy, he always goes,
But none of them know where!
This girl, she frowns. This boy, he smiles.
As he wanders into the woods.
She doesn’t go to meet him,
But her heart tells her she should.
So day by day, this boy he goes:
Comes back with dirty sleeves.
His face is scratched, his shirt is torn,
His shoes covered with leaves.
The girl sits at her windowsill.
He is always in her head!
He walks on by, she wants to stay,
But she follows him instead.
Step by step, she walks the road:
The road turns to a path.
She follows his footsteps, for nearly an hour,
She finds the boy at last!
WHICH SHOULD I CHOOSE FOR THE END?
OPTION A:
She says “Why do you come here every day?
Nobody in town knows!”
He looks ashamed, he whispers softly,
“I planted you a garden, will you be its rose?”
OPTION B:
She says “Why do you come here every day?
Nobody in town knows!”
He looks ashamed, he whispers softly,
“I planted you a garden, I planted you a rose?”
Any other suggestions?
The same time every day.
A boy walks by, bucket in hand:
She melts as he walks away.
When the sun is high, he strolls through town.
The people stop and stare.
It drives them crazy, he always goes,
But none of them know where!
This girl, she frowns. This boy, he smiles.
As he wanders into the woods.
She doesn’t go to meet him,
But her heart tells her she should.
So day by day, this boy he goes:
Comes back with dirty sleeves.
His face is scratched, his shirt is torn,
His shoes covered with leaves.
The girl sits at her windowsill.
He is always in her head!
He walks on by, she wants to stay,
But she follows him instead.
Step by step, she walks the road:
The road turns to a path.
She follows his footsteps, for nearly an hour,
She finds the boy at last!
WHICH SHOULD I CHOOSE FOR THE END?
OPTION A:
She says “Why do you come here every day?
Nobody in town knows!”
He looks ashamed, he whispers softly,
“I planted you a garden, will you be its rose?”
OPTION B:
She says “Why do you come here every day?
Nobody in town knows!”
He looks ashamed, he whispers softly,
“I planted you a garden, I planted you a rose?”
Any other suggestions?