Please what do you think of my writing style?

amiri

New member
In a mountaneuos village ,I came to this world .By age six,my life started strange from the very beginning. I used to get up early in the morning to take my breakfast and to go to school and,by habit, no one ever prepared breakfast for me or even wooke me up to go to school. Sometimes I was lucky when I found some leftovers from dinner, I did not care whether it was a healthy food or not, I was just interested in filling my belly. As many students, I went to school carrying a large bag of books. When I looked at the faces of all the students, I found them different from mine. They were active, happy, and there was a large smile on their face. , then I felt that I was older than them, I always had the feeling that we were not the same. In winter, I wore clothes of summer, and in summer I wore clothes of winter. I used to wear what was available because no one had time to look after me.My mother was always absent and so was my father ,while my brothers and my sisters were always busy.
12 hours ago - 4 days left to answer.
 
Back
Top