Jean’s biggest fear was about to coming true. He knew her secret and could tell Catherine anytime he wanted, she felt powerless. Jean looked she was on the verge of breaking down. She crossed her arms angrily. ‘After what he did to me, how can he hurt me once again?’
Jean was confused. “Rico please.”
"Kiss me or I'll tell Catherine you did more then flirt with Johnny."
"I can‘t believe you!" She realized she was too loud. she quickly shushed herself, putting her hand over her mouth.
"Well, shut me up by kissing me then." Rico teased.
“What? No!” Jean frowned at him, the thought of kissing him disgusted her.
“Come on.” He laughed.
“I said no.”
“Come on!“ A slow grin spreading across his face.
‘How dare he blackmail me,’ she thought. “Fine,“ she said closing her eyes, leaning in. Ready to seal her immoral secret with a kiss.
“Fine.“ Rico turned his back on her and jumped out of the car laughing at her.
"Rico Wait!" I called, jumping out of the car after him. "Don‘t tell," I started before he cut me off.
“Jean relax, I won’t tell anyone. . . you know I always thought you were different then Catherine.”
“What?”
“You lie and do bad things just like we do, I thought you were sweet and innocent.”
His harsh words made her feel felt naive. “I’m not that sweet.” Jean raised her brow to him.
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Jean was confused. “Rico please.”
"Kiss me or I'll tell Catherine you did more then flirt with Johnny."
"I can‘t believe you!" She realized she was too loud. she quickly shushed herself, putting her hand over her mouth.
"Well, shut me up by kissing me then." Rico teased.
“What? No!” Jean frowned at him, the thought of kissing him disgusted her.
“Come on.” He laughed.
“I said no.”
“Come on!“ A slow grin spreading across his face.
‘How dare he blackmail me,’ she thought. “Fine,“ she said closing her eyes, leaning in. Ready to seal her immoral secret with a kiss.
“Fine.“ Rico turned his back on her and jumped out of the car laughing at her.
"Rico Wait!" I called, jumping out of the car after him. "Don‘t tell," I started before he cut me off.
“Jean relax, I won’t tell anyone. . . you know I always thought you were different then Catherine.”
“What?”
“You lie and do bad things just like we do, I thought you were sweet and innocent.”
His harsh words made her feel felt naive. “I’m not that sweet.” Jean raised her brow to him.
(rewrite for the better and u win) any tips?
IM WRITING IN 3RD PERSON BUT I GET INTO 1ST A FEW TIMES