The Driver
New member
im a producer but love to write bars i just always feel like their wack. so i just want some feedback from people i dont know so they will be more honest. i want useful feedback though not just people saying i suck or whatever. here goes
the fear of death follows from the fear of life, a man who lives his life full is down to die at any time so,
i focus on my potential and leave the rest behind
cause i refuse to go until im finally satisfied
my head pounding and i need to get some rest
but insomnia's a bi##ch and her sisters name is stress
I've got them both till the reefer curse the stress
but i still cant sleep now im eating less and less
but when i find another beat i think its fresh, my pen just hits the paper its the only way i can express
the way the rhythm in my ears makes me obsess, the way the time between the snares just makes my mind work at its best
i cant explain but making music makes me calm,
it clears the mind so i can sleep until i start again at dawn
but if i stop my inner peace will all be gone,
till i hit a bong, play a beat and write another song
id love to have your feedback thanks!
the fear of death follows from the fear of life, a man who lives his life full is down to die at any time so,
i focus on my potential and leave the rest behind
cause i refuse to go until im finally satisfied
my head pounding and i need to get some rest
but insomnia's a bi##ch and her sisters name is stress
I've got them both till the reefer curse the stress
but i still cant sleep now im eating less and less
but when i find another beat i think its fresh, my pen just hits the paper its the only way i can express
the way the rhythm in my ears makes me obsess, the way the time between the snares just makes my mind work at its best
i cant explain but making music makes me calm,
it clears the mind so i can sleep until i start again at dawn
but if i stop my inner peace will all be gone,
till i hit a bong, play a beat and write another song
id love to have your feedback thanks!