please see if you like my poem or not?

Kai

New member
i have written this song.please tell me whether it's good or not?

oh it was so different the last time
but it's not so today
something has come something gone
it's no like yesterday

there's always a change
some where something
we can't understand
where it has bee
it's always going on
unknown to you
rebuilding your life
changing you

something is lost
something is gained
something remains with us
as everything changes
someone gets hurt
someone regains
someone surprised
but things never stays

there's always a change
somewhere something..........

transforming one's outlook
metamorphosing
creating a new look
renovating
it's something we can't comprehend
it's just the beginning what we see as the end

there's always a change
somewhere something..............

well if you like the song please let me know
 
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