Hey! I would really appreciate it if you took the time to read some of my poems and give me some feedback on them. Also, please tell me which is your favorite and why. Thank you!
My Poems:
Empty.
Why do you feel this sudden unhappiness?
Why?
Why is it that you feel this sudden emptiness?
Feeling lonely is it… does the gray rainy sky make you frown?
Open your eyes, and remember how much you are loved and cared for, and that it will not last forever… don’t frown, seeing you smile, is like seeing the happy blue sky, it will come soon…
Just another poem…
Here I have written you another poem, a poem in which I explain, here my deepest thoughts, my deepest wishes, my deepest desires, and my deepest darkest secrets, what is going on in the world, pretty much my life, in general. Poems are like my diary excerpt, except, it’s written in way, we all can relate to. I pour out all my feelings, in a matter of a few sentences, I give you the key to open up a whole world of my personal, world, in which I take you on journey through, the good & bad times of my life… All in all it’s just another poem…
You…
You always told me how much you loved me…
You always were there for me…
You always told to reach for the stars, and do what I love…
You always encourage me to be myself…
You always told me “everything will be alright”…
You always believed and had faith in me…
You love me the way I am, and accept me for who I will be…
You are a person who I have always care for, and always admired…
You truly are amazing…
The Storm…
The sounds of the roaring thunder, and the quickening flashes of lighting, the pitch black sky, not a sight, not a sound, but the storm… The rain crashing down against the windows, the wind pushing against the shutters and the on going sounds of sirens… all this commotion is it but a nightmare, or is it reality? Or is of total dementia? Whatever the reason, my head twists and turns, all these emotions, all the rage and sadness, within me. My mind lies within The Storm.
Empty.
Why do you feel this sudden unhappiness?
Why?
Why is it that you feel this sudden emptiness?
Feeling lonely… does the gray rainy sky make you frown?
Open your eyes, and remember how much you are loved and cared for, and that it will not last forever… don’t frown, seeing you smile, is like seeing the happy blue sky, it will come soon…
My Poems:
Empty.
Why do you feel this sudden unhappiness?
Why?
Why is it that you feel this sudden emptiness?
Feeling lonely is it… does the gray rainy sky make you frown?
Open your eyes, and remember how much you are loved and cared for, and that it will not last forever… don’t frown, seeing you smile, is like seeing the happy blue sky, it will come soon…
Just another poem…
Here I have written you another poem, a poem in which I explain, here my deepest thoughts, my deepest wishes, my deepest desires, and my deepest darkest secrets, what is going on in the world, pretty much my life, in general. Poems are like my diary excerpt, except, it’s written in way, we all can relate to. I pour out all my feelings, in a matter of a few sentences, I give you the key to open up a whole world of my personal, world, in which I take you on journey through, the good & bad times of my life… All in all it’s just another poem…
You…
You always told me how much you loved me…
You always were there for me…
You always told to reach for the stars, and do what I love…
You always encourage me to be myself…
You always told me “everything will be alright”…
You always believed and had faith in me…
You love me the way I am, and accept me for who I will be…
You are a person who I have always care for, and always admired…
You truly are amazing…
The Storm…
The sounds of the roaring thunder, and the quickening flashes of lighting, the pitch black sky, not a sight, not a sound, but the storm… The rain crashing down against the windows, the wind pushing against the shutters and the on going sounds of sirens… all this commotion is it but a nightmare, or is it reality? Or is of total dementia? Whatever the reason, my head twists and turns, all these emotions, all the rage and sadness, within me. My mind lies within The Storm.
Empty.
Why do you feel this sudden unhappiness?
Why?
Why is it that you feel this sudden emptiness?
Feeling lonely… does the gray rainy sky make you frown?
Open your eyes, and remember how much you are loved and cared for, and that it will not last forever… don’t frown, seeing you smile, is like seeing the happy blue sky, it will come soon…