Please read my poem.....;)?

leialee

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Heartache.

You feel it. The lighting in which strikes whithin your flesh.
Memories, so bitter sweet.
The taste, pure rust, as if blood.
Its the sound of the tears you will shead.
The sad songs which ring in harmony.
Your eyes, seeled shut, will open.
You will awake from this nightmare we all Heartache.


My neighbor teaches literature and she said it was rally good. I just wrote it... cuz i felt it. Well what do you think?? Honest opinions;)
 
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