Please read my poem and tell me what you think?

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Me

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Day by day
I feel the same pain
My heart still hurts
My tears like rain
I hide my frown
By wearing this smile
The last true one
Hasnt been seen in a while
Its all your fault
This is because of you
My ideas shot down
None of my dreams come true
And you still dont stop
Your yelling still fills my ears
You just wait,
Til that day i disappear
 
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