Please read my college essay and tell me what you think?

Holding this knife to my head, thinking about how I ended up here. In front of me are walls designed to get me lost forever. If I don't make it to this college, this knife will pierce through the veins of my head and into my brain. Out the other end you will see blood at the end, you won't see anymore. I need to make it or else I fail at life. I need to make it or else... My life is literally over. I know this isn't a 500 word essay but as you can see, I really want to get in this college. Give me a chance and I will show you the fabulous student that I am.
 
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