Please Read and Review My Story!?

[Rosalie Dearling]

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2517619/1/Blue_Eyes

Please Read And Review my story! I need feedback on this!
please review on the story.

 

[missbroadway]

You have an extensive vocabulary and great ideas!

 

[glad_i_am_me]

hey sorry i have the worst attention span ever so i cant read stories... i was just wandering how you made the picture of that eye

im real into photography but i never know how to do special effects like that

 

[nastehnedd]

so good! it doesn't need any changes.

 

[genuine illusion]

I reviewed your story, I'm acapella33.

It's really good, and I love vampire fics, especially well-written vampire fics, so I'll be sure to like yours.

I'll give you more constructive critism while you post.

=)

 

[annelise u]

i love it! as good as twilight!

 

[Selena P]

Maybe. Could you tell more about it?