Please rate my poem? 10 Points!!?

[Mag (Ugh)]

Salt and pepper are used to bake
pick them up and shake shake shake
when your meal
is all done
you'll have food for everyone!
Yeah, it's my best stuff.
Miss Black Parade- Psshh, whatever. This is my SOUL you're talking about here.

 

[barbwire]

The most beautiful poem I have ever read. I'll give you another 10.

 

[BennBJBear]

I don't want the points.
Out of..oh, say ten..
7 for originality (who uses PEPPER to BAKE??? remind me never to eat your cookies...sheesh)
8 for 'flow'
1 overall for claiming it's your best. And the one is only cause I grudgingly respect you for staying faithful to the Vikings. It's a sympathy vote doncha know..

 

[Miss Black Parade]

uhhhh....whats this poem for? i give it a three or a two.

 

[Mixtli]

You need to add a little more detail in the beginning that gives the reader a reference of how much food you are preparing, before simply introducing everyone. I'll give it a 6 because I like pepper.

 

[C.S.Scotkin]

ROFL, can I throw up now or do I have to wait in line?