Please let me know if my poetry is considered "free verse" and comment. THANKS?

Twinkle

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writing to submit a piece of poetry in class but do not have much experiece writing. can this be considered a poem?

i'm sure you knew
that you had to leave
eventually. soon
you lousy bastard

it is not that
i live in oblivion
it is not that
i function in a fairyland (a hole)
where there are no tears
no goodbyes
it is not that
i don't know what you are up to
what you want (i want to f**k you)

like kenny lectures
like kenny warns
you'd know the things to say

you applied the right
strategy/formula/theorem
(selected out from your shelves the right set of spells)

to make me care enough.
but just so you know,
i know.
 
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