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I didn’t choose to do what I did; I did it because I had no choice
For all the things that came my way, never once did I rejoice
As I live on this planet earth, with a great deal of remorse
I think to myself will I fail, or will I pass through heaven’s doors?


One thing I don’t regret, is the decisions I’ve made
It made me who I am, and put me in my position today
We can’t run from this life, so we must listen to fate
And accept what we’ve got, and believe everything is okay.



I plan on adding a little more to it, like maybe one more stanza...or should i leave it like this....and is it good? please rate 1 to 10
 
As I live on this planet earth, with a great deal of remorse
I think to myself will I fail, and my life take another course?

One thing I don’t regret is the decisions I’ve made
It's why I am who I am and in my position today.
We can’t run from this life or be afraid
Accept what you've got, and believe life is okay.
 
As I live on this planet earth, with a great deal of remorse
I think to myself will I fail, and my life take another course?

One thing I don’t regret is the decisions I’ve made
It's why I am who I am and in my position today.
We can’t run from this life or be afraid
Accept what you've got, and believe life is okay.
 
This made me think...I like it a lot :)
I honestly wouldn't change a thing.
but if you wish to add one more line..uhm idk
- So I will enjoy every moment, and live for today? ..
*( hey, its late !!!! )* .. yeah it's awesome.

read my poem? :)

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