PLEASE HELP --- NEED ADVICE ABOUT MY POEM?!?!?

[xXluvliviXx]

What do you think of my poem?

Whispers, whispers
Are all I hear
Whispers , whispers
Coming near
Whispers, whispers
In the dark
Whispers, whispers
Make their mark
Whispers, whispers
All around
Whispers, whispers
Hear their sound
Whispers, whispers
What do you want?
Whispers, whispers
Like to haunt
Whispers, whispers
Fade away
Whispers, whispers
Will be back another day.

Please be specific, and give criticism/comments about it.
Thanks