plz help me make this sound realistic and better.
Jean got on her knees, managing to get on top of his lap she pulled up her skirt and her back while still under the blankets. B felt dizzy from the alcohol but knew Jean drank a lot more. He could smell her beer soaked breath, B forced himself to sit up making Jean slide off. Jean held on to B‘s side pocket, “why are you leaving?” B stood up, "I just . . . can't," sliding on his slippers he walked out of the room avoiding eye contact with her, he left the room as quickly as possible in fear he might continue. Jean laid back down, feeling embarrassed she punched her pillow and dove into it barring her face in in it. Jean didn’t expect him to walk out on she couldn’t believe she threw herself at him as hard as she did.
Jean got on her knees, managing to get on top of his lap she pulled up her skirt and her back while still under the blankets. B felt dizzy from the alcohol but knew Jean drank a lot more. He could smell her beer soaked breath, B forced himself to sit up making Jean slide off. Jean held on to B‘s side pocket, “why are you leaving?” B stood up, "I just . . . can't," sliding on his slippers he walked out of the room avoiding eye contact with her, he left the room as quickly as possible in fear he might continue. Jean laid back down, feeling embarrassed she punched her pillow and dove into it barring her face in in it. Jean didn’t expect him to walk out on she couldn’t believe she threw herself at him as hard as she did.