i started writing a poem but i dont know how to finish it. it sounds kinda bad and it needs a lot of work. help me out. just tell me what i should do to make it sound good.
i feel like crying
i have no real friends
they dont care
i really did love them
and they hurt me so...
my heart is in pain
as these tears overflow
down my face
a little bit of happiness fades from me
that little star in the dark sky
i can no longer see
i just wanna crawl in a corner and cry
im all alone and cant stand this misery
if only there was someone out there
i just wanna go to sleep forever
no one would even care
i feel like crying
i have no real friends
they dont care
i really did love them
and they hurt me so...
my heart is in pain
as these tears overflow
down my face
a little bit of happiness fades from me
that little star in the dark sky
i can no longer see
i just wanna crawl in a corner and cry
im all alone and cant stand this misery
if only there was someone out there
i just wanna go to sleep forever
no one would even care