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Dear Mr.,
I am very interested in the position of Bakery Clerk or the position of Deli Clerk. I have found this ad through a search engine that I came across on your website, and I have also heard great news of the clerk employments at your establishment from a friend of mine. I believe you are seeking someone that can fulfill the role of these positions, and I have the necessary skills, experience and capabilities to work for you.
From my past jobs, I have acquired the skills to adapt to working in busy environments with a manner that is suitable to the unique situations that I have encountered. I have gained Deli expertise through my time working at a Vietnamese store, and I am also currently taking a PC 1 Apprenticeship course, where I am working with Ms.B, a very strict and professional baker and confectioner. I learn from her in the Baking section a High School’s Teaching Kitchen.
Throughout the period that I have worked, and my course of learning in my PC 1 Apprenticeship program, I am:
- Able to work effectively as part of a team
- Able to work under pressure
- Able to interact with customers and provide quality service
- Capable of memorizing products and their respective prices.
Although my resume (would be attached) provides a summary of my background and experiences, I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you and further discuss any available opportunities that you have to offer at this (store). You can reach me anytime at (this number). I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance for your consideration.
Dear Mr.,
I am very interested in the position of Bakery Clerk or the position of Deli Clerk. I have found this ad through a search engine that I came across on your website, and I have also heard great news of the clerk employments at your establishment from a friend of mine. I believe you are seeking someone that can fulfill the role of these positions, and I have the necessary skills, experience and capabilities to work for you.
From my past jobs, I have acquired the skills to adapt to working in busy environments with a manner that is suitable to the unique situations that I have encountered. I have gained Deli expertise through my time working at a Vietnamese store, and I am also currently taking a PC 1 Apprenticeship course, where I am working with Ms.B, a very strict and professional baker and confectioner. I learn from her in the Baking section a High School’s Teaching Kitchen.
Throughout the period that I have worked, and my course of learning in my PC 1 Apprenticeship program, I am:
- Able to work effectively as part of a team
- Able to work under pressure
- Able to interact with customers and provide quality service
- Capable of memorizing products and their respective prices.
Although my resume (would be attached) provides a summary of my background and experiences, I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you and further discuss any available opportunities that you have to offer at this (store). You can reach me anytime at (this number). I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance for your consideration.