Please help! I'm desperate!!!!!! 10 points for 1st answer!?

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Hey!
I am writing a book and I'm so totally torn between what to write about. I have to ideas will you please tell me which one is better.

Idea 1- These girls are going into 7th grade and for beginning exams in Life Design Class they have to start a business in groups. The most popular clique gets paired up with a scholarship girl who no one can stand. Along the way When the alpha invites the girls over to work at her mansion, the scholarship girl steals her phone and text her freinds nasty e-mails, starts rumors, and finds out a secrets. At the end the group gets to have a photo shoot for W magazine's page 6. Everyone is friends but scholarship girl is still friendless.

Idea 2- These three girls who all hate each other enter sophomore year and they all are pretty, rich, snobby, and hate each other. the names are Aspen, Brittany and Chloe. They all get paired up to start a business with Claire a scholarship girl. They all are academically challenged. Meaning the highest the get is Bs. Well they all hate each other and don't get along, but they are forced to band together and put their differences aside so they can win the design challenge. Because they all have one thing in common they all want to win. Only because the winners get to be featured in W magazines page 6 and get to be head of Party Planning Committee at their school. They try to start a cosmetic line named Poseur but that doesn't work out so they try a fashion line at the end they all get As and they all make a succesfull fashion line and win the challenge.

Which one do you guys think is better. Any suggestions. Please help best, most supportive answer will get 10 points.

Thanks a lot! =]
Thanks guys.
You guys are GREAT!!!
 
2 b/c it has alot more interesting stuff in it the other one was not as interesting but both were good you sound like you would be a good writer
 
I like idea 1. mostly because i like the types of books that have conflict in them. i think that when the girl steals the cell phone and sends bad things around would be really good for your book. i also like the ending. to me, the books with sad endings are the best.... don't ask y,.. i've always thought that. i think its mostly because it's unpredictable.
good luck
hope that helps :)
 
I believe Idea 1 is better because it seams more likely to happen. It is also very exciting sounding. Also I believe it would be more likely to happen to 9-10th graders.
 
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