Please Help. How do I write a good introduction? should I just write what’s going on...
...I’m in a place that I des? I’m not sure if I should make this the intro or just put it some where else in the story.
(write it if you want to win hehe. I’d love it but if u don’t want to just give me tips. please write this all in 2 paragraphs)
(intro)Jean sat on Catherine’s bed slowly putting on her glittered lip gloss checking her cell phone every few minutes. She sat back and blasted music, closing her eyes she imagined Johnny’s face again. Jean opened her eyes, “stop thinking about him!” She hated thinking about him he was different then B and Brent. He was someone he could never be happy with because Catherine would always be in their lives and she loved him as well.
(later on)
Jean jumped off the bed, careful not to slip and sprain her ankle. She looked around for things to pack into new clutch purse. She grabbed her lip-gloss, her cell phone and mirror. She couldn’t think of what to say to Johnny, should she be clever and mysterious or direct and playful? Jean walked out of the room in a zombie like state. She couldn’t think she suddenly felt excited she turned the lights off, locked the room and ran down the stairs slowly grinning.
...I’m in a place that I des? I’m not sure if I should make this the intro or just put it some where else in the story.
(write it if you want to win hehe. I’d love it but if u don’t want to just give me tips. please write this all in 2 paragraphs)
(intro)Jean sat on Catherine’s bed slowly putting on her glittered lip gloss checking her cell phone every few minutes. She sat back and blasted music, closing her eyes she imagined Johnny’s face again. Jean opened her eyes, “stop thinking about him!” She hated thinking about him he was different then B and Brent. He was someone he could never be happy with because Catherine would always be in their lives and she loved him as well.
(later on)
Jean jumped off the bed, careful not to slip and sprain her ankle. She looked around for things to pack into new clutch purse. She grabbed her lip-gloss, her cell phone and mirror. She couldn’t think of what to say to Johnny, should she be clever and mysterious or direct and playful? Jean walked out of the room in a zombie like state. She couldn’t think she suddenly felt excited she turned the lights off, locked the room and ran down the stairs slowly grinning.