please give opinion about my poem?

wealldie

New member
I remember the day
Clear as ever been
I was looking to meet someone new
And ended up finding you

It was a surprise to me
A gift from the gods I suppose
It was the best thing that happened that day
You left me with nothing to say

I enjoyed our short friendship
It was my fault it ended
Never meant to do the things I did
Now our friendship is dead

Never meant to ask too many questions
Never meant to apologize so much
I wish I’d given you your space
Now all I have left is tears running down my face

So whatever I did
I want to take it back
Let us go back to the start
And together fix my broken heart

I met a beautiful girl that day
And I hope she reads this
Her name is Kelsey
Please let us go back to what used to be OR Please come back to me

For the last line, tell me which is better. We have not ever gone out yet and I like her. Shes in NJ and im in CA
 
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