Please edit my poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?

Ash4476

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Ok, so we have to do a poem for history. Why? there is a play about the middle ages and 3 people (including me) wanted the same part, so the teacher decided to have a tiebreaker. Since the character is a poet, she's having us all write love poems. Please read mine and tell me if it is good. Please tell me of any changes I should make. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! Here is my poem:

What is Love
by Ashley

What is love?
Is it just a tale,
Of evil and saint,
good and bad

Is love a yes or no.
Joy or sorrow,
elation or pain
Sun in my hair, or the blackest of nights

Is it a savior from the storm,
Or the storm itself.
Is it a smile with family and friends
Or a tear all alone

Is it a kiss goodnight,
Or a kiss goodbye
What is it?
What is true love?

Please tell me the TRUTH!
 
Wow! I love it! It is strong in emotion and thought provoking. I wouldn't be surprised it you got the part!
 
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