Please crituqe my poem.?

  • Thread starter Thread starter Joseph M
  • Start date Start date
J

Joseph M

Guest
title "I Have Tasted the Crab Apple"

there I went to smell something foul
was it the crab apples decaying on the forest ground
if it was not that, well it doesn’t matter now
now I remember it, as the smell of a valve

my love had loved me as it been told
but as the crab apple, her soul could mold
so leave it as that, she’s a person I couldn’t bear
but despite that, she was my edible pear

she but a fruit I still would taste
despite that she has completely decayed
I can’t say more, as I get irate
when I realize my f@cked up fate
 
Back
Top