I just want some feedback on my drawing that I just finished. I'd like some actual feedback, not "It was good." or "It sucked", please. 
If you see things I can fix in future drawings, please tell me, and if you like certain things, what shouldn't I change? Thanks in advance and the link to the picture on my DeviantArt is below. Copy and paste it into your web address bar.
http://fish-and-chips-yum.deviantart.com/#/d362ok9
Brian- Thank you for the tips and in the future I'll work more on textures to make the clothing less plain. ^_^
Mary- I know, drawing takes utter concentration. XD I was actually sitting in my office for 3 hours straight with nothing but music, pencils, and paper. Though thank you for the suggestions.
Jordan- Thank you for being harsh, because you gave me some extremely good advice! The proportions and center of the body (gravity and making their poses look like they won't fall over) have been things I've been working very hard on, and this just reinforces that I have quite a ways to go, lol. Thank you for helping me find out what works and what doesn't. I was unsure if the outfits were too plain or too outrageous, and am glad that the select coloring worked well. Eyes are also a difficult concept for me, because when I draw more than one person they usually look identical, or completely different. I'll try to find a better balance. I've also done some minor theory with human anat
kd- Thank you for the help, I did not know the four principles, and will have to memorize those. XD I'm glad I got one right.
If you see things I can fix in future drawings, please tell me, and if you like certain things, what shouldn't I change? Thanks in advance and the link to the picture on my DeviantArt is below. Copy and paste it into your web address bar.http://fish-and-chips-yum.deviantart.com/#/d362ok9
Brian- Thank you for the tips and in the future I'll work more on textures to make the clothing less plain. ^_^
Mary- I know, drawing takes utter concentration. XD I was actually sitting in my office for 3 hours straight with nothing but music, pencils, and paper. Though thank you for the suggestions.
Jordan- Thank you for being harsh, because you gave me some extremely good advice! The proportions and center of the body (gravity and making their poses look like they won't fall over) have been things I've been working very hard on, and this just reinforces that I have quite a ways to go, lol. Thank you for helping me find out what works and what doesn't. I was unsure if the outfits were too plain or too outrageous, and am glad that the select coloring worked well. Eyes are also a difficult concept for me, because when I draw more than one person they usually look identical, or completely different. I'll try to find a better balance. I've also done some minor theory with human anat
kd- Thank you for the help, I did not know the four principles, and will have to memorize those. XD I'm glad I got one right.