Please Could You Judge My Poem?

[Sapphire R]

This poem is part of a series of poems following the same story line - I've posted some of the others with questions to answer if you want to see them
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The waves crash to a halt against the cold stone
A the harsh wind beats the sand,
Whipping it across the shore.

Pidgeons hover midair,
Not daring to land
On the freezing ground.

The bitter chill in the air,
Paralyses you yet even if I could move
I wouldn't dare.

I'm waiting for someone to return
And here I shall stay until they do
Staring at the horizon.

Not caring what is going on around me,
Just gazing out to sea
Praying that you will come home.

 

[meme]

I think its lovelly, Well done I wish I had enough of an imagination to write poetry! x

 

[Wendy L]

I like it... its beautiful