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tajaly

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TITLE: RESEARCH INDICATES THAT CHARACTERISTICS WE ARE BORN WITH, HAVE MUCH MORE INFLUENCE ON OUR PERSONALITY AND DEVELOPMENT THAN ANY EXPERIENCES WE MAY HAVE IN OUR LIFE. WHICH DO YOU CONSIDER TO BE THE MAJOR INFLUENCE.

Because I am not a specialist, it's really hard to me to talk about nature and nurture. Both of these subjects are so complicated since they are related to some sciences like as Biology, medical science and social sciences and have been discussed along many years and there have been so many progresses about them. So, just and specialist or a group of specialists deserve to talk about them but this can be some points of view.
Nature is a matter which cannot be changed. Perhaps it depends on your genes and your mind structure. If you want to change it, you must change your genes and it would not be possible. You might have seen some murderers or rubbers. They seem to be amendable but when you talk with them you realize that as if they are instinct murderers or rubbers and how can you change an instinct murderer? It will not possible except by some progresses in biology perhaps.
Nurture is a thing that is changeable. It completely depends on upbringing, situations and atmosphere not your body or your mind. If persons have special nurture and they would be at a different atmosphere, they will be changed. As all of us can see, when people immigrate to another country, their behaviors will change during the time since communication with others affects on nurture. Also, many children can be changed by cultivating.
Finally, I cannot exactly say which of them is more important: nature or nurture. I think it depends on how much stronger one of them is and this matter needs some specialists to explain.
 
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