Part 3 to my story!! also includes parts 1 & 2 and I need suggestions thanks!!?

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First part:Heather sat at the end of her sisters bed. Trying to figure out the clues to what her seventeen year old sister Jessica has been hiding for the past month. Heather was her twelve year old sister. Heather rose quickly when she came threw the door crying. The door slammed behind her, knocking down books lying on her desk. "Please go out, I don't have time to deal with you to," Jessica said wiping tears from her face. Heather replied with, "And why not?" Jessica sat down at her desk trying to remove the smeared mascara below her eyes. Jessica mumbled under her breath something Heather could not make out. "Well I need to interview you for a," Heather paused a moment to think of the words she needed to get the answers, "project we are doing in health class.""Get out please," Jessica said rising to shove her sister out of her room. Heather went out and Jessica went through her closet to finding something comfortable that will fit her now. Later that evening Heather came back to Jessica's door knocking. Heather said, "Dinner is on the table!""O.K, I will be down in a second after I get off the phone with Victoria," Jessica replied. Victoria is Jessica's best friend since kindergarten. Jessica went down to dinner to find Heather and her mom sitting with dinner prepared on the table. After dinner was over, the door bell rang. Her mom answered and it was Nicholas York. Jessica rose quickly telling her mom that it was her friend that was a boy, from school. Both of them went up stairs into her room. "So did you tell your mom," Nicholas ask. Jessica replied "About us?" Nicholas came back with, "Well, that too." She replied, "No""Sooner or later it is going to show and between us too," he said. Jessica said, "I know, I just want to know what is going to happen for my future, your future, our future?"Part 2:Jessica hit the alarm clock that was set for six a.m. She sat up motionless when she felt her stomach had grown rounder and bigger. She rose from bed gazing at her stomach. She ran quickly covering her mouth as she ran to the bathroom. Heather heard her as she slammed the bathroom door from her bedroom, which was across the hallway. Heather jumped up and raced to the bathroom door. She placed her ear against it gently so she could hear every move in the bathroom. After she heard no noise in the bathroom, she gently turned the knob. She saw Jessica sitting on the bathroom floor crying. Heather gasped as she realized what her sister had been hiding. Jessica saw her and said, "Heather please don't say anything to mom, I am begging you." Heather replied, "But how?" She closed the door after the words left her mouth. Jessica jumped up feeling she would throw up a third time. Heather turned her head after she knew what Jessica was doing.Later that morning as Jessica was about to tell Heather what had happened and when. Their mom came through the door, "Girls, I have to run to town I will be back around two.""Ok bye mom," Jessica said as her mom was shutting the door. Jessica looked at Heather and began. "Do you remember that night I went to Victoria's house?" Heather replied, "Yes, but I thought it was just you and Victoria?" Jessica jumped as the door opened. "Oh I forgot to tell you, Jessica, if grandmother calls tell her I will call her back as soon as I get back is that understood?" mom said. "Yes, mom," Jessica replied. Her mom said "Jessica is there anything wrong, you seem very jumpy lately?" Jessica said, "Oh No I am fine." Their mom left and Jessica turned and said to Heather, " Heather, I can't tell you right now, I think later will be better.""But......but, how can you explain it when your stomach is round and huge to mom?""I-I-I'LL just come flat out and tell her," Jessica said getting up to look out the window.*Jessica is now 6 weeks*Jessica sat at her desk trying to figure out how she was going to tell her mother about her unplanned motherhood she is going to experience. She opened her laptop and gotten on her email up. She typed what she wrote on the paper. Minutes later she pushed send. She rose quickly and ran down the stairs. Her mother was on the computer, the email made it to her mothers email. She peeked around the corner till where she saw her mother reading it. Her mother sat there in dismay. She began to get up, as Jessica ran upstairs. Part 3:Jessica sat on her bed waiting for her mother to barge through her door. Jessica jumped as her mother came through the door, yelling french, which she learned in college. As her mother calmed down, she spoke in english. Jessica made out, "I can not believe you.....what about you education.....who is the father........you should have thought of it first." Jessica rose with saying, "Mom, Nicholas is the father." Her mother replied, "Well what about your education, you need it and what about college?" Jessica and her mother went on and they finally agreed that she would be home schooled.*Jessic
 
Omg!!!!! Im serious. I mean this is an original but it is aweosme!!!!! I aint playin I would love to read more. But when you say its part one two and three are those the chapters? Cuz if they are they should be longer!! But still it is really awesome well id love to hear more
 
It's okay for a start, not great, but okay. Just to let you know someone isn't going to be big and round when they are only 6 weeks. It's possible for her to keep it from her mother for at least a couple months without showing.
 
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