My thesis statement is: Traditional classroom learning is better than on-line learning even in this age of modern technology because personal interaction is still the most effective way of conveying and understanding discussions unlike self-learning bsed only on the instuctions and lectures given on the Internet.
Here is my two-level topic outline:
I. Similarities and Differences of Traditional Classroom Learning and On-line Learning
A. In relation to the progress of technology
B. Personal interaction
C. Flexibility of schedule to complete the student’s work at their own pace
D. Cost
E. Environment impacts
F. Accessibility to the medium or area of location
G. Comprehension of the students
H. Convenience in honing specific skills
II <I won't write the headings under II anymore because what I will be asking is for Roman Numberal I only>
My professor commented on Roman Numeral I these...
"You say these are similarities/differences but this appears more like an enumeration than a comparison/contrast"
I think it's just a matter of word choice. Please help me. I desperately need your help. Thank you!
Here is my two-level topic outline:
I. Similarities and Differences of Traditional Classroom Learning and On-line Learning
A. In relation to the progress of technology
B. Personal interaction
C. Flexibility of schedule to complete the student’s work at their own pace
D. Cost
E. Environment impacts
F. Accessibility to the medium or area of location
G. Comprehension of the students
H. Convenience in honing specific skills
II <I won't write the headings under II anymore because what I will be asking is for Roman Numberal I only>
My professor commented on Roman Numeral I these...
"You say these are similarities/differences but this appears more like an enumeration than a comparison/contrast"
I think it's just a matter of word choice. Please help me. I desperately need your help. Thank you!