Doc, can you fit me in your schedule today?
I don't think this can wait another day.
No, I'm not delirious.
This time it has to be something serious.
Why do I have to explain myself?
Obviously you don't care about my health.
You know what, F*ck it.
But you'll feel sorry when I kick the bucket.
I already know my diagnosis
So why am i wasting my time for some hypnosis
Because I know i don't have much time left anyway.
I felt my health declining day by day.
Is this the way I want to go?
My body doesn't, but this knife says so.
So God I hope you are watching me in the act.
Please make room for this hypochondriac.
BTW, I am NOT SUICIDAL! lol, but I used to be a hypochondriac and i'm just writing on how i use to feel.
But anyways, opinions please, and please constructive criticism. I feel like this needs more detail.
ok romance, but what do i need, more detail, better rhythm scheme? help me here!
I don't think this can wait another day.
No, I'm not delirious.
This time it has to be something serious.
Why do I have to explain myself?
Obviously you don't care about my health.
You know what, F*ck it.
But you'll feel sorry when I kick the bucket.
I already know my diagnosis
So why am i wasting my time for some hypnosis
Because I know i don't have much time left anyway.
I felt my health declining day by day.
Is this the way I want to go?
My body doesn't, but this knife says so.
So God I hope you are watching me in the act.
Please make room for this hypochondriac.
BTW, I am NOT SUICIDAL! lol, but I used to be a hypochondriac and i'm just writing on how i use to feel.
But anyways, opinions please, and please constructive criticism. I feel like this needs more detail.
ok romance, but what do i need, more detail, better rhythm scheme? help me here!